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error analysis
Sophomore
Conversation
and Composition,
Group
B
Language
Review--
Frequently
Made Errors
Doris
Li-wen Chang
Tense
1. Two years ago, you have
to pay NT $ 10,000 dollars just to get a phone number, to say nothing of
a phone.
Two
years ago, you had
to pay NT$ 10,000 dollars just to get a phone number, to say nothing of
a phone.
2. The current rule was
that there could be two imports on the court
playing at the same time.
The current rule is
that there can
be two imports on the court playing at the same time.
S-SC, S-V Agreement
1. We've all heard a cell phone
rings and everyone reaches for their phones, thinking that the ring is
theirs.
2. Japanese soap opera are mostly shorter
(about 10-15 volumes for each opera) so the plots are tighter that the
audience won't get tired of it.
3. All television programs are not bad,
but it needs to be seriously examined.
4. On the other hand, if the differences
of living style or habits is not a big deal, living together can prepare
each other for the future life, even the marriage.
5. But before we buy the cell phones,
we have to think clearly whether we need it or not.
6. Do we need instant access to my friends?
7. These commercial might reflect people's
view about women's role in society.
8. The commercial try to convince people
that to lose weight is effortless and even enjoyable.
9. However, the ideas that woman are valued
by their appearances, which is rooted in our mind are now revealed in these
commercials.
10. What happens if the friends that you
get along is bad people?
Parts
of Speech (WF)
1. Therefore, a lot of problem
result from the montey sharing is on account of the vague line between
the sharing.
2. It takes no hard work to success.
3. If you don't watched out, the same
tragedy would happen again.
4. Teenagers who are brought up in a broken
family tend to be mental unbalanced.
5. Interpersonal relationship with other
people can influence our self-reliant and attitude towards life.
6. The person himself may know nothing
of them, too.
7. This effect is generally ignore by
us.
Incomplete
Sentences
1. Another reason that must not
be discounted when trying to explain the abundance of cell phones.
2. Not to mention Taiwan's crave to follow
Japanese fashions and peer influence that are the ultimate causes of this
phenomenon crush on Japanese opera.
Logic &
Clarity
1. Besides, knowing each other
more is another advantages of living together because since we love each
other we will reveal the best part to each other.
2. Therefore, you must not know some curious
habits that conceal from you, such as pick ones nose when reading the
newspaper, the light should be on when sleeping, and so on.
3. Styles, sizes and colors of cell phones
have nothing to do with the quality of the phone, but they go a long way
in satisfying the urge to be ourselves.
4. Furthermore, everyone can hear his or
her conversations on the phone because they have to speak loud enough in
order to make them clear.
5. Following the step of the NBA, the CBA
1998-1999 season has suspended.
6. However, CBA lockout is not stopped
whereas the NBA playoffs are heatedly played.
7. This problem was the result of the incomplete
rules of players changing.
8. In addition to TV revenue and sponsors
financial support, the income of tickets holds only a small percentage
of the income; however, the lack of audience who would like to go to the
gyms to watch the games reveals player, team and marketing problems.
9. Money usually leads people to become
more ambitious because they would desire for more and more money after
their first income.
10. X and Y generations just love something
new and exciting; Japanese fashion somehow fits this point.
Dangling
sentences
1. Oftentimes, they would invite
someone famous who has been customer of their institution now successfully
lose weight under their help or instructions.
2. Why nor there are such institutions
for men in the market?
3. We should try to explore what is the
real cause of this evil act.
4. The wrong way of saving money led to
the lack of professional sports marketing, with which the audience were
not be persuaded to go to watch the games.
5. Youngsters fashion changes very fast
in Japan, I believe fashion is created by people so those fashion creators
always try their best to catch youngsters' attention.
Wording
& Expressions
1. The might find schoolmates
or friends who have similar ages with them.
2. What kinds of reasons will make you
use your bodies to exchange money?
3. The reason of the establishing of the
rule was that we lack young, good, local players.
4. When she is undergoing inspection by
a hospital, she finds that she has got AIDS.
5. When you have no money, you do this
behavior.
6. We can prevent our body from those
health problems.
7. Let us be a vivid student in the hectic
pace of life in the university.
Recommended
Vocabulary Sites
http://www.eng.fju.edu.tw/iacd_98F/con_com/sophomore/onlinetools.htm#dic
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